article introduction

I have decided that the article on my double spread page will be about, a Hip-Hop female artist who has been criticised by men in the industry because she is a female artist as Hip-Hop is mostly associated with men.The article will be an interview with the artist however, i will be written in first person.I think an interview is the best way to get the audience attention because everyone is more interested in what the artist has to say rather than the unknown writer.i will scatter pulled out quotes across the page to grab the readers attention,this way it will engage the reader more into the article. I have written a little bit of my introduction and it goes like this
"In an era of male dominated Hip-Hop industry, the new female artist emerges and outtakes everything and everyone."